Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Serrian salt

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Serrian salt

The salad/sandwich stuff sound a little bit redundant, but I believe there is no better way to phrase it. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:11, March 8, 2014 (UTC)
Thought I'd better review it since my discovery for the update pushed it here :P Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:41, March 10, 2014 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:41, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:26, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
MasterFred^(Whatever) 23:16, March 19, 2014 (UTC)

~~The date for LOTJ:U given in the essential reader's companion is c.18 BBY not 19 BBY, so you'll need to change that and the reference.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:04, March 12, 2014 (UTC)
- Fixed. I'll note here that The Essential Reader's Companion does not mention the Diner's destruction and neither source confirms if the diner was destroyed during 19 or 18 BBY. It happened during one of those years, there just isn't any information saying which.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:00, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
  - That's a fair point, and one I'm going to have to go fix in a whole bunch of articles. Damn. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:40, March 13, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think the BTS should say that the Star Wars Sourcebook, Second Edition was "...also written by Slavicsek and Smith." That's only true in the sense that the second edition copied the first edition's text verbatim up to a point. The second edition actually credits its text more properly to Peter Schweighofer and Bill Smith, who revised and updated the first edition's text. It would be simpler to just remove that bit from the article rather than trying to explain all of this.
- Removed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:20, March 16, 2014 (UTC)
~~It's been my understanding, as well as the practice of multiple other status articles, that Dining at Dex's is an Appearance, since it's in-universe.~~ Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:55, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
- Fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:20, March 16, 2014 (UTC)

~~Very minor, but I wouldn't call Coruscant the "galactic capital." It's not the capital of the galaxy, just the Republic/Empire.~~ MasterFred^(Whatever) 21:51, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
- I just removed that part.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:36, March 19, 2014 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:01, March 20, 2014 (UTC)