Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Serra Keto

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Serra Keto

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Support

-Darth_Revan- 16:05, 09 September, 2007 (CAT) (User does not meet the minimum number of main space edits required to vote; removing vote per policy. Greyman^(Paratus) 17:03, 22 September 2007 (UTC))

1. Chack Jadson ^Talk 00:37, 20 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Needs to be sourced. --Imperialles 14:19, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
2. Needs sourcing, and it's just too short. Chack Jadson ^Talk 23:30, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
3. A few thing need to be improved:
   • The article needs to be referenced (Requirement 2a).
   • The intro could be expanded.
   • One of the images ([1]) needs to be properly sourced (requirement 6a)
   • And, like you said in the comments section, The article needs to be expanded.
     After you have improved these things I'll review the article again. --Jedimca0^{(Do or Do Not, There is No Try)} 13:18, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
     • Fixed everything but the article expansion. Chack Jadson ^Talk 01:09, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
       • Good work. --Jedimca0^{(Do or Do Not, There is No Try)} 14:18, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

• I like this article, but it would be nice if it could be expanded a bit. -Darth_Revan- 16:05, 09 September, 2007 (CAT)
• It's just too short. I've worked on it, but I'm not a good enough writer to expand it sufficiently. Chack Jadson ^Talk 23:34, 16 September 2007 (UTC)