Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Selea

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Selea

• Nominated by: Zed42 ^(talk) 12:03, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Always nice seeing Zygerrians that aren't evil (well, she is a Nihil, but still)
• Date Archived: 00:37, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 500 words (101 introduction, 369 body, 30 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 500 words (105 introduction, 365 body, 30 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:NOVELS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Panther436 (talk) 23:47, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 01:20, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 03:20, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
4. CometSmudge (talk) 03:54, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
5. Booply (talk) 00:35, 23 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

Panther

• I honestly don't think you need the third setence of the bio. It's not super relevant and the general idea is conveyed in the sentences before and after it. Plus, the OZ/Stormwall context can still be organically included when it's brought up in the next sentence.
  • I cut that bit down slightly, but I do somewhat feel like it has relevance -- of course, since Selea isn't explicitly described as being there the entire time it can't be said that she took part in those raids, but in my opinion the general objective of Shryke and her crew is useful context to have. Zed42 ^(talk) 03:10, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
    • I do sort of think this implies Selea was there the whole time, but I don't mind it that much Panther436 (talk) 23:47, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
• Probably should briefly include that Shryke's crew was part of the Ministry of Protection, cause that would make Salea part of it Panther436 (talk) 01:59, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Good point, added that. Zed42 ^(talk) 03:10, 16 May 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• I think it would be worth briefly specifying that Porter disappeared. Since you mention they tried to prevent both him and Avar from escaping and only address what happened with Avar Lewisr (talk) 22:24, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
  • How does that look? Zed42 ^(talk) 23:27, 19 May 2024 (UTC)
    • That works, thanks Lewisr (talk) 01:20, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

Comet

• I think that it should be specified that Cacophony is a Stormship instead of just a starship (It's identified as a Stormship in Shadows of Starlight 3). CometSmudge (talk) 02:51, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
  • That's fair, updated Zed42 ^(talk) 03:24, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:36, 23 May 2024 (UTC)