Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Secret landing platform

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Secret landing platform

Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 06:06, 3 May 2025 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 00:27, 3 June 2025 (UTC)
Final word count: 536 words (82 introduction, 332 body, 122 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 506 words (83 introduction, 324 body, 99 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

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~~I would remove/rephrase "just outside" in the intro as I don't believe that's accurate. The episodes visually show that it was a decent distance away so that it remained secret.~~
In the Description section, the wording makes it sound like the main city could be reached directly from the platform, when the specific transit tube was solely between Nala Se's private lab and the platform. I was thinking something along the lines of "Making use of the Kamino tube system, the platform connected directly to Nala Se's private lab which in turn provided access to the main structures of Tipoca City." - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 18:58, 3 May 2025 (UTC)
- Good point, tweaked this. Wok142 (talk) 19:33, 3 May 2025 (UTC)

~~It looks like refs 9 & 10 are duplicates, unless one wasn't meant to be slide 6.~~

~~For ref 2 it would be ideal to cite the specific part (story gallery or otherwise wherever it is) instead of the overall shell part.~~—spookywilloww^talk 16:38, 1 June 2025 (UTC)
- Cleaned references. Wok142 (talk) 19:47, 1 June 2025 (UTC)

~~The title doesn't seem to be conjectural since the episode guide does call it "secret landing platform", so the First ID might need to be mentioned~~ CometSmudge (talk) 03:08, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
- Handled. Wok142 (talk) 17:29, 2 June 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:27, 3 June 2025 (UTC)