Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Second Battle of Empress Teta

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Second Battle of Empress Teta

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Support

  1. Nominated. Greyman(Talk) 18:11, 12 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. Graestan(Talk) 02:33, 13 March 2008 (UTC)
  3. Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 22:45, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
  4. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:49, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
  5. Proudly supporting TOTJ since 2007! Chack Jadson (Talk) 17:02, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. You use "however" too much in the second paragraph of "The Battle". Otherwise, it's good. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:17, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa:
    • One minor thing: if possible please provide a bit more description for this to explain when Jeth died. "...earlier before the battle" would probably suffice; otherwise, it kind of seems like this happened during this battle: "Ulic still felt immense guilt at not being able to prevent the death of Arca Jeth," Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:42, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Thanks :) Greyman(Talk) 16:48, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  • Huh? What's that? Oh ya, WP:TOTJ keeps on rolling. Greyman(Talk) 18:11, 12 March 2008 (UTC)