Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/S-Mine Detonator

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S-Mine Detonator

• Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 23:58, 6 January 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another one goes over
• Date Archived: 02:28, 14 February 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 491 words (82 introduction, 218 body, 191 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 427 words (75 introduction, 193 body, 159 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 00:02, 16 January 2025 (UTC)
2. My first time reviewing an article with a concept art gallery in action 👀 OOM 224 18:02, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 21:20, 1 February 2025 (UTC)
4. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:19, 13 February 2025 (UTC)
5. Booply (talk) 02:23, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

Object

Dani

• I think the BTS needs to be restructured to say was 1stIDed in these two articles on X date, which was a preview to its inclusion in SWGOH (originally released on Y date) on Z date. If that makes sense. Kit Reveal: Eighth Brother on the Star Wars Galaxy of Heroes Forums (original site is defunct) and Developer Insights: Eighth Brother on the Star Wars Galaxy of Heroes Forums (original site is defunct) Both of these articles go in External Links NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 19:15, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
• There is some design bits relevant to the mines in the Developer Insights forum. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 19:15, 9 January 2025 (UTC)
  • These have been handled. Wok142 (talk) 23:19, 10 January 2025 (UTC)
• Trailer needs a date. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 21:44, 11 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Good catch. Wok142 (talk) 05:50, 12 January 2025 (UTC)

Lew

• Think it'd be worth browsing through Eighth_Brother#Sources to just check incase of sources, I imagine most cases will be a Po but Star Wars: The Dark Side Pocket Expert for example does mention them, happy to help search any if you don't have access to Lewisr (talk) 06:15, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
  • In progress, one more still needing to be tracked down. Wok142 (talk) 22:20, 14 January 2025 (UTC)

Vitus

• I'd include grenade in the infobox, as well as point out in the description that detonator was also classified as a grenade. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:43, 11 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Grenade has been added to the infobox. For the second point, do you mean explicitly state that? I think having the alternate name in there is sufficient. Otherwise I would be saying something along the lines of: "S-Mine Detonators, aka Photon Grenades, were disk-shaped explosives. The detonators, also classified as grenades, were handheld etc etc" so that feels a bit redundant. I at one point used grenades and detonators interchangeably when referring to them to sort of address this point, but I felt it could be potentially confusing. What do you think? Wok142 (talk) 21:49, 11 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Hmm, I suppose this is just a bit of a weird one, considering detonators and grenades are different types of devices. But then there's something like a thermal detonator, which functions like a grenade.... Honestly, thinking on it further, I think it's fine how you have it now. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:19, 13 February 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:27, 14 February 2025 (UTC)