Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Roodown

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Contents

  • 1 Roodown
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/7 Users/10 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
      • 1.1.3 Comments
        • 1.1.3.1 Geek'ari
        • 1.1.3.2 AV-6R7

Roodown

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:00, April 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Our first TFA nomination.

(3 ACs/7 Users/10 Total)

Support

  1. That looks really good. - LoLuX12 (walkietalkie) 12:12, April 16, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Awesome article Geek'ari Talk 12:34, April 16, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Nice work! - AV-6R7Crew Pit 16:56, April 16, 2016 (UTC)
  4. Great work indeed! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders AnilSerifoglu (talk) 01:13, April 26, 2016 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 21:58, June 4, 2016 (UTC)
  6. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:12, June 5, 2016 (UTC)
  7. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 03:08, June 23, 2016 (UTC)
  8. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 22:08, June 23, 2016 (UTC)
  9. --Lewisr (talk) 22:15, June 23, 2016 (UTC)
  10. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:51, June 28, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:51, June 28, 2016 (UTC)


Geek'ari

In the first sentence, when it says Roodown "was a Abednedo scavenger on the planet Jakku who angered his employer, the junk dealer Unkar Plutt, who suspected he was selling salvage to a different buyer," do you think you could change the wording a bit so it doesn't use the word "who" for both Unkar and Roodown? Maybe split the sentence in two/change the wording? Otherwise, great article! Geek'ari Talk 03:38, June 9, 2016 (UTC)

  • Re-worded as per your request. Ayrehead02 (talk) 06:14, June 9, 2016 (UTC)
    • Nice job.Geek'ari Talk 12:24, June 9, 2016 (UTC)
AV-6R7

Roodown appears in the new Jakku scene for Star Tours: The Adventures Continue; this info should be somewhere in the article. The full scene can be found on YouTube. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:54, June 23, 2016 (UTC)

  • Added a paragraph to the Behind the Scenes section. I've left it out of appearances and sources for now since it mostly seems to be treated as legends? I can added it to appearances with the non-canon tag though if people would prefer that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:46, June 23, 2016 (UTC)
    • Thanks! - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:37, June 23, 2016 (UTC)
      • BTW, can you eliminate those red links? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:13, June 23, 2016 (UTC)