Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rokrul

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Rokrul

• Nominated by: MasterFred^(Whatever) 04:01, September 10, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: More awesome from Star Wars: Clone Wars.

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Good work, Jang! Winterz (talk) 11:34, September 21, 2013 (UTC)
2. #blamejang IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 23:10, October 12, 2013 (UTC)
3. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 22:18, October 21, 2013 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:27, October 24, 2013 (UTC)
5. Byzantinefire (talk) 19:16, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
6. Supreme Emperor (talk) 21:35, November 2, 2013 (UTC)
7. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:31, November 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Fredo Corleone, is that you?

• Reload infobox, mister.
• You could probably give some context on the Ghost Hand legend.. perhaps in the description section?
• Great Mother seems relevant enough (as a deity or whatever) to warrant an article.
• The battle isn't linked in the body! Winterz (talk) 23:30, September 12, 2013 (UTC)
  • All fixed; all blamed on Jang. MasterFred^(Whatever) 06:44, September 21, 2013 (UTC)

El Jefe

• Need a link to the Techno Union base in the intro.
• NO FIRST NAMES, BRO COME ON IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 01:25, October 7, 2013 (UTC)
  • All fixed. I've emailed the complaints to blamethejang@gmail.com MasterFred^(Whatever) 16:46, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• Prelim: are there any more sources that mention the village, directly or indirectly? I glanced at The New Essential Chronology and it's indirectly mentioned there as the "village" to where the mutilated Nelvaanians return. Please do some source-checking to make sure that the article's coverage of source material is entirely complete. I'd say that in general, anything that mentions the battle of Nelvaan or any of Anakin's pre-ROTS adventures is worth checking. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:19, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
  • TNEC has been added. I've gone through several more reference materials and found nothing. I'll keep looking. MasterFred^(Whatever) 02:13, October 22, 2013 (UTC)
    • Added TNEGAS. MasterFred^(Whatever) 20:55, October 23, 2013 (UTC)
      • I did some more checking myself, and there are a few sources that mention a "tribe" as opposed to a village (Unknown Soldier: The Story of General Grievous and The Clone Wars Campaign Guide). I'll leave it up to you whether to treat the "tribe" as equal to the "village" (and thus integrating those sources as an {{Imo}}), or just leaving them alone. However, there are two more Databank entries that mention Rokrul but aren't listed in the article: horax in the Databank (original site is defunct) and Techno Union in the Databank (original site is defunct). They need to be checked for info and then added to the Sources list. Come on, Fred. CC7567 ^(talk) 20:53, November 1, 2013 (UTC)
        • Added. MasterFred^(Whatever) 07:27, November 2, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:53, November 3, 2013 (UTC)