Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rokak'k

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Rokak'k

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:58, 20 February 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project: Gree continues with a nom from scratch \o/. 334 words.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 06:48, 21 February 2009 (UTC)
2. --Eyrezer 03:24, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
3. Graestan^(Talk) 14:33, 25 February 2009 (UTC)
4. Cylka^-talk- 00:42, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
5. Grunny ^(Talk) 02:56, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Graestan the Merciless:
   • "around the various worlds of the Gree Enclave … circuited the worlds of the Enclave" is a bit repetitive in the intro.
     • Changed.
   • "Master" kinda needs more of an explanation in this article than it does in the one for his ship.
     • Context added.
   • Guild needs some context.
     • Context added.
   • "rudely" is POV without more of a frame of reference provided.
     • Removed.
   • Graestan^(Talk) 04:29, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments

• Is there another category he could be placed in? Pilots or some such? --Eyrezer 03:24, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
• I'd be loath to call him a pilot since his position in more akin to a captain. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:33, 24 February 2009 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:33, 6 March 2009 (UTC)