Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rikkar-du

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Rikkar-du

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Support

  1. Nominated. DC 21:24, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
  2. --Eyrezer 05:57, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
  3. Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 13:14, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
  4. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 21:10, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
  5. Fifth.—Tommy9281 Red lightsaber (Peace is a lie) 04:13, 15 August 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. The desk of Atarumaster88
    • "He was surpised to see Kruhl use the Force to destroy them, who revealed to Rikkar-du that he deactivated them before the meeting. " Unclear antecedent'
      • Better?
    • "though he escaped when he met his future wife, Tassa, who was the daughter of the rival clan's chief." This really should be detailed more.
      • Ready to Die didn't give a lot of info on that subject, though I did what I could.
    • Otherwise clean. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 21:17, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the review. DC 00:51, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
  2. Per Ataru, who said everything I would have. Another quote or two wouldn't hurt either. See about that & I'll support.—Tommy9281 Red lightsaber (Peace is a lie) 04:36, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
    • Fixed Ataru's objections, and added two quotes. DC 00:51, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  • One source, so no referencing is needed. DC 21:24, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
  • The opening quote, is it "clans' support" or "clan's support"? --Eyrezer 06:03, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
    • The former. DC 22:35, 7 August 2008 (UTC)