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Ressa

  • Nominated by: —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:56, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:<sarcasm>If you haven't read Revan yet, and you particularly can't wait to hear the exciting tale behind Nyriss's artifacts, you may not want to check out this article yet.</sarcasm>

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. I do not write a lot FAs because I believe they are hard to write. But small articles seem to be even harder. Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:02, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:05, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 05:10, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Menkooroo 04:01, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 21:24, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • However, her own and her children's lives were spared by Sith Lord Darth Nyriss. In gratitude for sparing their lives: Can you use another phrase for "sparing their lives" here? It's the third time in this rather short article.
    • Changed. Rather hard to find differentiating wording in such a small article. :P But, I think I found a different wording there that kind of changes it up nicely.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 14:49, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Ressa had the ability to be a queen of an entire planet.: Something on this sentence bugs me. Can we really she was able to be a queen? I mean you don't need to be able to be a queen, you can be very stupid and be a queen just because of your heritage (if you understand what I try to say). Any ideas?
    • Actually, I thought of that when I was writing it, but I figured it would be okay on the basis that I didn't put that she had the ability to be a good queen. She was a queen, thus, she must have had the ability to be one, whether good or bad. However, I understand the confusion, so if this doesn't make sense, I'll change it to read something like "She was the queen of an entire planet."
  • Otherwise excellent work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:35, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • In the husband article, we're capitalizing "Pureblood" Sith. Why is this article treating it differently?
    • Yeah. Fixed.
  • Does the source actually say this? Just because she's the queen doesn't mean she actually has the ability to be queen. She might just be a totally ineffectual leader, for all we know: "Ressa had the ability to be a queen of an entire planet." Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:19, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • For the reasons stated above to Lee, but since neither of you think it would work right, I've removed it.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 14:41, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:24, January 14, 2012 (UTC)


  • Just a note: I didn't find this worth an objection, but by "past sense" I assume you meant "past tense," which is what I changed it to. Please let me know if you meant to say something else. CC7567 (talk) 05:10, January 13, 2012 (UTC)