Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Resolution (Venator-class)

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Resolution (Venator-class)

Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:17, January 20, 2012 (UTC)
Nomination comments: MedStar II, last planned GA. My first ship nom, the NTB-630 naval bomber does not count.

—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 17:06, January 21, 2012 (UTC)
nayayen ★talk 19:23, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:40, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:44, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
I still remember when this thing showed up at the end of the book. One of the most memorable scenes of the entire duology. Menkooroo 02:30, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

~~Needs the last sight section filled in in the infobox.~~
- Adressed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:38, January 21, 2012 (UTC)
~~You need to add that it was hyperdrive equipped in the infobox, as you state in the body.~~
- Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:38, January 21, 2012 (UTC)
Nice work.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:29, January 20, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:38, January 21, 2012 (UTC)
~~One more thing: You need to link the Battle of Drongar in the body, as you do in the infobox and intro.~~—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:31, January 20, 2012 (UTC)
- Linked. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:38, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

If the article is going to use an unrelated source like CSS to assert a manufacturer, it might as well do the same to assert the Star Destroyer's standard size. Depending on certain factors, you might also take this as far as to assert basic armament specs. Toprawa and Ralltiir 08:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)
- Basically, I could include all info referenced by the CSS in this article to the infobox and the body. Do you think this would be appropiate? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:28, February 11, 2012 (UTC)
  - I would not add everything, just because it's possible the ship could have been modified in many ways. But we can make a basic assumption about its size, for example, which is why I say add that in. I figure we could also make a basic assumption about its standard weaponry, unless the source gives us reason to suggest it too may have been altered. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:50, February 12, 2012 (UTC)
    - Added basic info about its size and the weaponry. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:50, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

I remember from when I first saw the lead quote for this article some time ago, it never really made any sense. I always thought thw "they were rolling right over us" part referred to the Resolution, but it's actually referring to the fact that the Separatists were almost overrunning the Republic position. You could reword it to something like, "upon seeing the Resolution after repelling the Confederate forces" would probably make sense.
- Changed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:22, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
~~It's probably worth noting that it escorted the MedStar-class (that the main characters are on) from Drongar.~~
- Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:22, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
—NA YAYEN 17:16, February 27, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:22, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

It seems like the Republic forces on Drongar were under a heavy assault during the evacuation. Can any detail of this be provided in the article, such as why the assault was under way, and the fact that, according to the opening quote, the Republic forces appeared to be losing until Resolution arrived? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:06, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
- I fear the only info we have about the battle is presented in th article. We can't say that the entire Republic force is overrunned, the quote only shows the POV of a member of RMSU 7. However, I added a short mention about the reason for the attack. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:04, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:44, March 21, 2012 (UTC)