Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Resa Greenbark

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Resa Greenbark

  • Nominated by: NAYAYEN:TALK 16:19, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Who knew that baby triceratops counted towards your 5-a-day?

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. This made me laugh - A Christian 03:37, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
  2. The dark times seem only to grow darker. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:12, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Tasted like chicken...mmmmmm TK-299 (Click Here) Imperial Emblem 10:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:50, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 16:18, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote --Eyrezer 00:10, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
  7. ACvote JangFett (Talk) 15:19, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Farlstendoiro
  • Why don't you mention Mesa's name in the intro? At 1st sight, I thought she would be an unnamed character.
    • Good point, mentioned.
  • Question: Why do you tell her story through the eyes of Jennir, instead of chronologically? You could (should?) mention that: the Chagrian slaver Orso Meeto had sold Resa to Dezono Qua, a Human noble of Essels. Then, Bomo and the crew of Uhumele arrived to Orvax IV, hours late to find Resa; and they discovered what had happened to her.
    • Reworded that section.
  • Also, you should first mention that Qua ate her, and then Jennir arrived, discovered the fact and took measures.
    • I've moved it a bit earlier although it isn't that clear when she was eaten.
  • She was mentioned in Dark Times #16. Not relevant enough to say anything? Not even something like "Dad/Jennir/Whoever fondly remembered Resa months/years after her death" or something?
    • Nothing like that, although I did miss a line that said she was their only child so I've added that.
  • Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:45, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thanks for your review Skippy, I hope it didn't put you off your food. NAYAYEN:TALK 10:07, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
Chack
  • "On Orvax IV, Resa was taken to be sold by a Chagrian slaver, Orso Meeto. This resulted in Mesa being killed when she attempted to stop the slavers from taking her daughter." How many slavers were there? All from me, though I must say, this nom made me :S and :( (due to the subject, not your writing) :P Chack Jadson (Talk) 20:45, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
    • The comic only says "The slavers said they were taking Resa". I've clarified it a bit. Thanks for the review, glad you liked it, well, you know what I mean :P NAYAYEN:TALK 21:10, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
Graestan
  • No mention of the droid cook preparing her? He was apparently a genius with sentient meats. There has to be more to the story on Esseles. Please expand. Graestan(Talk) 01:27, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
    • Good point, added some about the droid. NAYAYEN:TALK 10:41, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
Eyrezer
  • "For comics, link to the individual issue, unless a subject appears in every issue of a story arc." Your article is an unusual case, but seeing as Resa is mentioned in each issue of the arc, I think this is a case where you could/should just have the arc in the Appearances list (Obviously keeping the sourcing to the individual issue). I'm open to divergent views on this, however. --Eyrezer 06:23, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
    • The thing is, she actually appears in the first issue but in the other issues in that arc she is only mentioned. I think that this is a distinction that should be made here because putting just the arc (with no other tags, ie. appeared in) would be incorrect because she didn't appear in every issue of the arc, only the first. This is the clearest way to put that. NAYAYEN:TALK 10:41, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
      • Well, you wrote the article so I'll defer to your preference. --Eyrezer 00:10, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:41, June 11, 2010 (UTC)