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Republic Domestic Security
- Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 01:36, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Domestic, what a peaceful word that covers oh so much.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 12:04, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:15, September 11, 2012 (UTC)- After a few minor changes, iz perfecto. :P MasterFred
(Whatever) 20:25, October 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:56, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 23:40, October 22, 2012 (UTC)- Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:43, October 26, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Pickiness
Context for the Skirata clan- I don't really see a need for context as "clan" provides context. Coruscantfan (Talk) 22:57, October 21, 2012 (UTC)
- That's all. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:21, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
Aesthetics: the first sentences of the intro and body read almost exactly the same. Please reword.- Done.
It would be worth mentioning in the body in which faction Kal Skirata ranks as a sergeant for more context.- Done.
"Palpatine's troop deployments": sounds like either the Grand Army of the Republic or clone troopers should be mentioned here as part of the Republic's war effort.- Linked to clone trooper
Since Order 66 is the RDS's only appearance, that should be mentioned in the Bts.CC7567 (talk) 20:37, October 22, 2012 (UTC)- Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 21:33, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:53, October 26, 2012 (UTC)