Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Republic Domestic Security

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Contents

  • 1 Republic Domestic Security
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Pickiness
        • 1.1.2.2 Attack of the Clone
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Republic Domestic Security

  • Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 01:36, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Domestic, what a peaceful word that covers oh so much.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:04, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:15, September 11, 2012 (UTC)
  3. After a few minor changes, iz perfecto. :P MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 20:25, October 16, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:56, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 23:40, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:43, October 26, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Pickiness
  • Context for the Skirata clan
    • I don't really see a need for context as "clan" provides context. Coruscantfan (Talk) 22:57, October 21, 2012 (UTC)
  • That's all. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:21, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • Aesthetics: the first sentences of the intro and body read almost exactly the same. Please reword.
    • Done.
  • It would be worth mentioning in the body in which faction Kal Skirata ranks as a sergeant for more context.
    • Done.
  • "Palpatine's troop deployments": sounds like either the Grand Army of the Republic or clone troopers should be mentioned here as part of the Republic's war effort.
    • Linked to clone trooper
  • Since Order 66 is the RDS's only appearance, that should be mentioned in the Bts. CC7567 (talk) 20:37, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done. Coruscantfan (Talk) 21:33, October 22, 2012 (UTC)
      • Please note the wording change that I made; noting its first appearance is still relevant. CC7567 (talk) 23:40, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:53, October 26, 2012 (UTC)