Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Remy

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Remy

  • Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:38, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Remy's really trying to tune into a good hip-hop radio station. Ha ha ha.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Pre-nom reviewed. —Master Jonathan New Jedi Order (Jedi Council Chambers) 01:49, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Nice work. Still don't like {{C|}}, though. >:( :P -- 1358 (Talk) 07:12, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:04, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:37, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 03:02, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Great Article! DarthRageLeave a message after the beep
  7. ACvote Grunny (talk) 12:09, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Fett
  • It's been a while since I read the CW adventure comics. Does the comic say what the Confederate base was or where it's at?
  • IIRC, didn't Sev sent Sah to the world with Remy?
    • Yes he did, the reason it lists him first in the intro and bio is that I was attempting to make it more relevant to the character.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 02:17, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • You could mention something in the P&T regarding all three quotes. I realize you mention that he respected Palaptine's order, but an expansion could suffice.
    • I think I see what you're saying, please try it.
  • That's it, nice work. JangFett (Talk) 02:01, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
Xd1358
  • The databank doesn't state that this clone was born in 32 BBY. Please remove.
  • Question: Is there any reason why (clone) is that small? Y'know, the infobox text is already quite small, and it makes the text quite hard to read.
    • Using the {{C|}} template is the way I've seen most users put it in the infobox.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:31, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • "..this clone trooper sergeant received the nickname "Remy"[2] some time after the Clone Wars began on Geonosis in 22 BBY." Perhaps he was given the nickname before the war? At least AotC doesn't state it.
    • Maybe, TCW clones seem to have nicknames before the war, but all the CW and Republic clones usually received them after the conflict started. Anakin started that, and Alpha-17 gave the clones he trained nicknames. Still, there's no telling when he received the nickname "Remy"—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:24, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
      • Well, if there's no telling, you can't have it; it's speculation. -- 1358 (Talk) 19:40, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
        • Taken care of, was just thinking of a way to word it.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:46, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • Reference 5: Same as objection 2; why is the comment that small?
    • Like the above objection, that's the way I've seen others do this. I didn't want to just source it to the encyclopedia, I wanted the reader to know that yes, this is where it identifies him, not in Sah's or Remy's entry, Gaan's got his own entry.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:24, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nice work. I thought it was TCW until noticing the year. :( :P -- 1358 (Talk) 18:56, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thanks for reviewing, I intend to do more clones soon.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:24, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I rarely make this objection, but I think the intro in this case is too long, relative to the body of the article. I would suggest condensing it by maybe a third. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:55, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
    • Shortened some, took out the part which details the LAAT/i's destruction. Thanks for the review!—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:57, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
  • After who arrived? The villagers? The soldiers? Clarify, please: "As they arrived, Sah ordered the sergeant to split up his troops" Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:02, August 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:09, August 6, 2010 (UTC)