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Rebb

  • Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 01:23, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Continuing my line of Ferren Barr's disciples noms
  • Date Archived: 03:46, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 827 words (120 introduction, 648 body, 59 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 816 words (117 introduction, 640 body, 59 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Wok142 (talk) 05:39, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:20, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 02:48, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
  4. Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 06:54, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 03:45, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

Wok
  • In the last paragraph of the bio, the sentence "the acolyte Orvek bought them more time by attacking the submarine and also perished." reads slightly awkwardly to me due to "attacking" and "perished" not matching tense-wise. Potential re-wording option could be: "the acolyte Orvek bought them more time, attacking the submarine and also perishing." Wok142 (talk) 20:23, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Same kind of mismatched awkwardness in the Skills and abilities section with "could drive" and "utilized." I would go for either "Rebb could drive an Underwater Turbo Sled Pike and utilize a blaster." or "Rebb drove an Underwater Turbo Sled Pike and utilized a blaster." Wok142 (talk) 20:23, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • I would've copy-edited this in but unsure as to exactly where you'd prefer it. But it would be good to have at least one of those BBY dates in the intro for reader context framing w the general precedent of them being up there.—spookywillowwtalk 02:54, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
    • Made the date more explicit Panther436 (talk) 22:30, 12 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:45, 17 May 2024 (UTC)


  • I know their hair looks brown in the infobox image, but it's consistently black in the non-flashback panels. Panther436 (talk) 01:23, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
    • We should include both, then. We can say it was black at the time of the comic's events, and brown at the time of the flashbacks. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:09, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
      • I'm kinda of the opinion that it just looks like that because of the yellow-brown filter on the flashback scenes, but that works, added. Panther436 RedNihilEye (talk) 17:45, 16 May 2024 (UTC)