Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Realm of Death

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Realm of Death

• Nominated by: 501st dogma^(talk) 14:57, November 23, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: An attempted CAN that grew too big

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 01:26, December 10, 2014 (UTC)
2. --Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 02:50, December 10, 2014 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 02:47, December 11, 2014 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:28, December 11, 2014 (UTC)
5. JangFett ^(Talk) 20:44, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Zuko's charge

• First of all, i've been reading the history section and, mabye its just me but, isn't Realm_of_Death quite repetitive in the text ? Mabye there is a way to put a pronoun somewhere ? Also, is there any quote you could add ? --Emperor Jarjarkine Senate Hall 02:09, December 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • Changed one realm to warship. There's no quotes to go with this. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma^(talk) 02:15, December 10, 2014 (UTC)

Jang

• Can you tweak the first sentence of the intro to reduce the amount of "that was"? JangFett ^(Talk) 20:37, December 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • There, thanks for the review. :) 501st dogma^(talk) 20:43, December 11, 2014 (UTC)
    • Np, that's better. JangFett ^(Talk) 20:44, December 11, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:47, December 11, 2014 (UTC)