Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Raymas Daal

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Raymas Daal

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:55, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Could make a Naboo WookieeProject at this point
• Date Archived: 19:03, 5 March 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 764 words (117 introduction, 509 body, 138 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 720 words (118 introduction, 493 body, 109 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 06:48, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 00:10, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:59, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
4. Castofstars (talk) 06:32, 4 March 2023 (UTC)
5. Samonic ^(Talk) 18:57, 5 March 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• How's about an equipment section and mention of skin color? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:06, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:54, 17 February 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• If you could sort the gender/pronouns update, even if it's blank and etc for unspecified, would be great.—spookywilloww^talk 16:41, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:46, 20 February 2023 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• Since we're no longer assuming gender from pronouns or appearance, I'm not seeing anything in Signal Interruption that describes Daal as male, is there something I've missed? Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:04, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
  • That's on me, fixed Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:17, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
• You can mention that Daal is willing to negotiate up to 10,000 credits. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:04, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:17, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
• I'd state in the BTS that Daal uses one of the generic mercenary counters for his appearance which depicts Televan Koreyy from The Phantom Menace. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:04, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:17, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
    • BTS is probably big enough now to split and maybe add an image? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:39, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
      • Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:39, 28 February 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• In previous articles on this source I have assumed that the player characters from the Invasion of Theed Adventure Game were the ones who completed the mission based on this line from the Wizards of the Cost website: Finally, Signal Interruption uses the rules, maps, and characters found in the Star Wars Invasion of Theed Adventure Game, however, given how inconsistent the events of the scenario are with the motivations of those playable characters and the fact that the scenario has options for dark side characters, I'm thinking characters in that quote is just referring to non-player characters and that the intention was for player characters to be unique creations. Happy for input before I update some of the existing status articles from this source Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:01, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:03, 5 March 2023 (UTC)