- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Ranik Solusar
- Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 07:35, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: One of those guys.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:21, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
JangFett (Talk) 13:36, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
Very nice. Xicer9
(Combadge) 17:02, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:08, June 8, 2010 (UTC)- Graestan(Talk) 03:41, June 9, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Lee Attacks
It should be a note about his death in the infobox.- Unfortunately, we don't actually know when he died. Thefourdotelipsis 11:20, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Well but at least something like: between 19-0 BBY ? Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:27, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
- In there now. Thefourdotelipsis 13:30, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Well but at least something like: between 19-0 BBY ? Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:27, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, we don't actually know when he died. Thefourdotelipsis 11:20, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
- All from me. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:34, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
Fett
Intro-"He married and fathered a son Kam Solusar" It sounds like he married the son, too. Could you please reword this to avoid any confusion- Commas are my friend.
Intro-"There, Solusar flew alongside several other Jedi" I'm assuming they "flew" in their respective starfighters, correct?- Indeed.
Context on trihexalon bioweapon in the bio.- Done.
You say that Palaptine branded the Jedi "Enemies of the Empire" simultaneously with declaring himself Emperor and reorganizing the Republic into the Empire. However, for factual correctness, could you please change the part about "Empires of the Empire" to "Enemies of the Republic"? If I recall, Palpatine declared them enemies prior to executing Order 66. Also, Order 66 was issued before he announced the beginning of the Empire.- Well, no, he called the Jedi enemies of the Empire in his public address. He called then enemies of the Republic when chatting with Vader. I've reshuffled, though.
- True, but "Enemies of the Republic" took place before he called the Jedi enemies of the Empire in his public address. :P
- Well, no, he called the Jedi enemies of the Empire in his public address. He called then enemies of the Republic when chatting with Vader. I've reshuffled, though.
- That's all, nice job. JangFett (Talk) 13:04, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you very much. Thefourdotelipsis 13:26, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:15, June 9, 2010 (UTC)