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Rakririan
(+5)
Support
- --Eyrezer 10:47, 30 December 2007 (UTC)
- Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:13, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:17, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- Cull Tremayne 10:18, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
- Goodwood
(Alliance Intelligence) 01:27, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- A few things from around the Family-sized pasta bowl of Fiolli:
First sentence is not really clear as to what is ambiguous, the species or the planet. A personal preference of mine would be to not use parenthesis in this situation.Intro paragraph: perhaps mention their heightened culture as a reason they viewed the rest of the Galaxy as unrefined.B&A starts right into "Their bodies…." A reiteration of the species name might be useful.B&A also makes no prose statements about species type or size of the being.Were "finicky" and "meticulous" used in a source or spoken by a person? If so, a quote might be nice in this section to amplify it. Also, the sentence that contains those words does not seem to be NPoV, even though they are in quotes; Perhaps it should state that their attitudes or actions gave rise to the species being labeled such?The home planet is not mentioned in the S&C section."In the Galaxy" section should probably restate that the species, for the most part, was either isolated from the Galaxy or did not travel. Whichever is better, I am not certain.The information about Plo Koon, I thought, came from Tales not Jedi Chef. If it is Tales, it should be marked with the ambig tags or moved to BtS if still relevant.- Jedi Chef is Tales. --Eyrezer 08:40, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
My apologies, but I believe it should still be marked with ambig tags. Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:16, 8 January 2008 (UTC)
- Jedi Chef is Tales. --Eyrezer 08:40, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
- Kudos for finding some relatively obscure information and making an article out of limited resources. Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:58, 1 January 2008 (UTC)
- I think I've dealt to all of these now - except the Tales tag. I purposely worded it vaguely enough that I don't think it needs the tags. --Eyrezer 22:53, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you. Nice work. Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:13, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
- I think I've dealt to all of these now - except the Tales tag. I purposely worded it vaguely enough that I don't think it needs the tags. --Eyrezer 22:53, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- I checked Rebellion, and the species is not mentioned. Only Sabodor is given a mention. I might consider removing the Rebellion appearance. Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:17, 21 January 2008 (UTC)