Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Raid on Reef Fortress

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Raid on Reef Fortress

• Nominated by: - Princess GLG 21:18, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WP:NOVELS, WP:MD

(6 ACs/1 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 15:04, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 23:59, June 12, 2013 (UTC)
3. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:59, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
4. MasterFred^(Whatever) 21:19, July 10, 2013 (UTC)
5. JangFett ^(Talk) 16:59, July 16, 2013 (UTC)
6. Winterz (talk) 20:08, July 19, 2013 (UTC)
7. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:21, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Object

501

• Body - context on Yavin 4?
  • Added.
• Body - "Soon after, Chume returned to Reef Fortress in her royal wavespeeder." This is picky, but I wouldn't say returned here, as you don't mention here having visited the place before. "Arrived" would work better.
  • Changed.
• I think the part about piloting the speeder into the seaweed should be moved into the Raid section, as it wasn't a separate event, just a continuation of the raid.
  • Done.
• Otherwise, good work. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:40, June 7, 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks. - Princess GLG 14:01, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Floyd

• Tenel Ka's relation to Taa Chume has to be mentioned somewhere, so we know why she's there. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 00:30, June 10, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added. - Princess GLG 18:23, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

Cav

• The assassins arrived on the island in an assault craft, cut off all power to the fortress, and entered by climbing the wall of the fortress. - repetition of "fortress", please vary
  • Done.
• Refering to Ta'a Chume simply as "Chume" sounds, well, wrong. Has she ever been refered to solely by that name, or is Ta'a Chume a full "royal" name that shouldn't be used in part? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:55, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
  • I'm really not sure. I've called her Chume in some of my articles and Ta'a Chume in others. Her article calls her Ta'a Chume the whole way through so I went ahead and changed it. - Princess GLG 11:39, June 27, 2013 (UTC)

From teh Frd Shd

In the infobox you say use "all" for the casualties on the side of the assassins, but Yfra, was not killed. MasterFred^(Whatever) 21:18, July 9, 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed. - Princess GLG 11:57, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Toprawa

• It's not necessary for the BTS to mindlessly make note of every single appearance and mention of the subject in published material. This should be reserved for key mentions of books that made a noteworthy contribution to the subject, such as when it was first included in canon, whether it was first pictured or first named, etc. I would suggest cutting out everything from the BTS except for the first sentence. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:51, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. - Princess GLG 23:30, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:21, July 24, 2013 (UTC)