Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Radank

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Radank

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 19:30, May 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: When your arm fails you, get a new one

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:50, May 9, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 11:04, May 12, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:31, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:29, June 20, 2014 (UTC)
  5. Emperor Jarjarkine GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Senate Hall 03:51, June 24, 2014 (UTC)
  6. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 23:30, June 25, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Code-8
  • Picky one: Please reword the first sentence of the biology section so that it better starts off afresh from the intro. As it is now it takes a while before the reader realizes they're an animal.
  • Please fix the repetiton of Yuuzhan Vong in the first section of the history. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 09:33, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • Also you could use some more categories, I suggest "Predators" and "Non-sentient species" (Sorry I don't know how to link to categories). Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 09:38, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
    • All done, thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 12:20, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • According to dictionary.com, the plural form of proboscis is proboscises. So what is this? "Radanks also used their probescus" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk)
    • Fixed. 501st dogma(talk) 15:57, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
  • Per the LG, the "History" section should be renamed to "Radanks in the galaxy" since none of that info applies to their homeworld. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:48, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done, thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 15:57, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
El Jefe
  • One quick thing. "the warmaster had killed the shapers he believed responsible," Did Lah kill them himself, or did he have them killed? It's ambiguous. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:36, June 24, 2014 (UTC)
    • That should clarify. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 11:39, June 24, 2014 (UTC)

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