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RX5-TLN
- Nominated by: Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 21:22, March 2, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A droid. I think this may be first. Be gentle.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:37, March 4, 2012 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:51, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
DarkStryder!! Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 22:11, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 06:08, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Someday, Cav will defeat DarkStryder once and for all.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 03:17, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Lee's charge
I noticed that the affiliation field in the infobox does not mention the Galactic Empire like in Olaver Lansel's article. Just to be sure, do we know if he belonged to the Empire?- The word "Imperial" is used in conjunction with descriptions of Lansel, which is not the case which RX5-TLN. Its only affiliation is known to be Sarne, and its presence on the planet only seems to be known to CUTH-BRT-92-X3 and Sarne himself.
- Thanks. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:37, March 4, 2012 (UTC)
- The word "Imperial" is used in conjunction with descriptions of Lansel, which is not the case which RX5-TLN. Its only affiliation is known to be Sarne, and its presence on the planet only seems to be known to CUTH-BRT-92-X3 and Sarne himself.
A little bit context would make it clearer that the Far Star is an New Republic ship.- I'm not sure how it could be clearer: Aware of New Republic pursuit, the Moff took steps to delay and inconvenience the crew of the CR90 corvette FarStar and Shortly after Sarne's departure from the planet, the New Republic CR90 corvette FarStar arrived in orbit both seem to show the FarStar as an NR ship quite adequately.
- OK. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:37, March 4, 2012 (UTC)
- I'm not sure how it could be clearer: Aware of New Republic pursuit, the Moff took steps to delay and inconvenience the crew of the CR90 corvette FarStar and Shortly after Sarne's departure from the planet, the New Republic CR90 corvette FarStar arrived in orbit both seem to show the FarStar as an NR ship quite adequately.
- Good work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:30, March 3, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. - Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 19:53, March 3, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. - Cavalier One
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:17, April 11, 2012 (UTC)