Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Qui-Gon Jinn's first apprentice

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Qui-Gon Jinn's first apprentice

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 08:08, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: CA-to-GA project part 4

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:03, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:52, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 02:30, April 26, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Menkooroo 03:44, April 26, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Grunny (talk) 07:21, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  • "Before he took the boy named Xanatos as his Padawan, Jedi Knight Qui-Gon Jinn had successfully trained his first apprentice." This reads a bit awkwardly. I would recommend rewriting this sentence. Otherwise, looks good. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 10:57, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:21, April 27, 2011 (UTC)


  • The addition of the intro brought this up to 256 words. However, the article may actually fall under the exception to the the CAN rule 14 regarding the Bts/body ratio. I personally think it's fine now. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 08:08, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
    • I count 100 words of non-BTS info, and the ratio looks roughly 50-50 to me, so I'd say this falls under the required word count for requiring a lead. I'll abstain from supporting or objecting, though. ~SavageBOB sig 04:21, April 27, 2011 (UTC)