Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Pyloon

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Pyloon

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 03:32, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 00:45, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 594 words (89 introduction, 421 body, 84 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 11:02, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 23:28, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:47, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 23:45, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
  5. Panther436 (talk) 00:36, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Marvac
  • Please state that Kashyyyk is a forest planet, not a jungle planet. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 19:59, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Just checked and in one of the dialogues, it mentions that Pyloon didn't want to take care of her family as she complained about it every day. Here's the full dialogue: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KUKu4rAXxZk Marvacian Archivist (talk) 19:59, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Alright found another piece of info about pyloon in this video, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6GwdyoN1y_4 Marvacian Archivist (talk) 19:59, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Please add a diambiguation page for Pyloon. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 19:59, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
    • We don't create disambiguation pages for only character's and their possessions.
  • Please state in your bts that pyloon shares its name with the dutch word pyloon which translates to pylon in English. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 07:09, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
    • This information isn't really necessary or relevant, and isn't precedence for character pages.
  • Maybe add an external links section and include the Manny Hagopian Twitter Link? Marvacian Archivist (talk) 07:09, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Please add reference from Star Wars databank of the Stinger Mantis being a luxury yacht. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 13:59, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Please fill in the new family parameter in the infobox and any other of the new parameter that need to be filled in. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 13:59, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
  • I think it is important for you to mention something like this in your bts section, "This article assumes that all optional dialogue involving or mentioning Pyloon has been seen and that all collectables mentioning Pyloon have been acquired. In Star Wars Jedi: Falle Order and Star Wars Jedi: Survivor, the optional dialogue and collectables do not affect the game's storyline, meaning that Pyloon has no alternate stories." Marvacian Archivist (talk) 07:03, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
    • This can just be done with a Gamemechanics template, which I added. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 23:41, 27 July 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • (Reviewing note) Per the Manual of Style, please do not place grammatical articles (such as a, an, and the) in pipelinks.
  • (Reviewing note) Also per MoS, Wook articles are presented as "historical recordings" with a formal language; therefore, please refrain from using contracted forms ("weren't," "didn't," etc.) in the future.
  • I believe adding a link to another page ([[Template:JFODate]]) to explain the game's date is redundant since you could simply source that to Star Wars: Timelines.
  • As Biography is divided into two subsections, please provide a header for the first section as well.
  • I think it'd be better to clarify in the Equipment section that the mentioned clothing is based on her depiction in the portrait.
  • If I'm not mistaken, it looks like Pyloon has white hair on the top of her head in the portrait.
  • Could you provide a source for Manny Hagopian's title as narrative director. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 09:09, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • Would it be fair to refer to Pyloon as a chef? Lewisr (talk) 00:15, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
    • In my opinion, chef would refer rather to the profession. Pyloon is indeed shown to be good at cooking, but that doesn't necessarily make her a chef. It may be better to ask the Discord tho? AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 17:55, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
      • I think someone could still see themselves as a chef/cook even if they were not a professional. I agree, however, that being good doesn't necessarily equate to being one Lewisr (talk) 16:24, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Any reason the tweet isn't used as a BtS quote?—spookywillowwtalk 20:06, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • I'm not entirely confident that I've gotten all the dialogue on Pyloon from Survivor, so if anyone discovers anything please let me know. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 03:32, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:44, 23 August 2023 (UTC)