Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Purghom Musical Performance Hall

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Purghom Musical Performance Hall

• Nominated by: MasterFred^(Whatever) 19:38, October 7, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First nom in a while.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Winterz (talk) 20:40, October 10, 2012 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 18:05, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
3. Most of the stuff I've seen from Role Playing games make me think, "How the heck is this Star Wars?" :P Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 21:18, November 8, 2012 (UTC)
4. Looks good. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:50, November 14, 2012 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 21:14, November 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Winterz

1. • "It was a gigantic circular auditorium that's defining aspect was" That connector seems displaced, you should use something else instead. Winterz (talk) 19:52, October 7, 2012 (UTC)
     • Seems Cav has fixed it up for ya. :P MasterFred^(Whatever) 18:58, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Cav

• used by the group's arranger Wurokkk as a musical experiment which ended in disaster for the Bith. - after reading the article and finding out Wurokkk was a Wookiee, this sentence is confusing. It appears that Wurokkk is a Bith, and the experiment ended in disaster for him, when the article states otherwise. Clarification is needed.- Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:22, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
  • Specified it was the populace that was affected, not Wurokkk. MasterFred^(Whatever) 18:56, October 10, 2012 (UTC)
    • Tweaked it a litte, adding Wookiee and linking to the musical piece. Also changed populace to audience unless Wurokkk managed to affected the entire population ;) - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 18:05, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:14, November 14, 2012 (UTC)