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Prozzen Fosky
- Nominated by: Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 19:32, March 10, 2012 (UTC) - Nomination comments: A Bith jazz musician
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:46, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination number 4 for WP:ENT! MasterFred
(Whatever) 15:41, March 27, 2012 (UTC) 
Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 08:50, March 29, 2012 (UTC)- CC7567 (talk) 06:30, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:59, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Lee's charge
In intro and bio you mention that he lived on Clak'dor VII, but as you list it as his homeworld, you need to mention that he was born there.- Well the source does not say that he was born there (even though he probably was), but a homeworld does not necessarily mean that a person was born there. The homeworld article says: "Homeworld was a term used to identify the planet that a being was born on, or migrated to..." So I can't really say that he was born there since the source doesn't say so, but in my opinion it can still be called his homeworld since he lived there.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:40, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
- I'm fine with this. Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:46, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
- Well the source does not say that he was born there (even though he probably was), but a homeworld does not necessarily mean that a person was born there. The homeworld article says: "Homeworld was a term used to identify the planet that a being was born on, or migrated to..." So I can't really say that he was born there since the source doesn't say so, but in my opinion it can still be called his homeworld since he lived there.--Exiled Jedi
speak Bothese, Durese, the Neimoidian lanuguage: I'm pretty sure that's an error, but just to be sure.- Fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:40, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed.--Exiled Jedi
- Good job. Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:33, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:40, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review.--Exiled Jedi
Cav
You ref most of the PT to pg. 27 of GATORW, but Fosky's bio is on pg. 29. I think you mean to ref parts of the PT to pg. 29, and only a small part (about the Bith being pacifistic) to pg. 27 correct?- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 14:33, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
- Good catch, fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:52, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
- Good catch, fixed.--Exiled Jedi
Comments
My first nomination for WP:ENT.--Exiled Jedi 
(Greetings) 19:32, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:59, April 10, 2012 (UTC)