Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Progga's starship

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Progga's starship

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 11:37, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: For the barnburner

(3 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Wait, did Thrawn have Hutt art to be able to defeat it? Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 02:35, June 10, 2013 (UTC)
  2. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 01:32, June 13, 2013 (UTC)
  3. --Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 20:01, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 23:47, June 26, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 13:57, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 18:08, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Objection! Sustained!
  • Was it mentioned in the CSWE since it's a ref note? Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 02:41, June 8, 2013 (UTC)
    • My bad, it was. Added to sources.
  • Would these categories fit: Unidentified starship and Hutt cartel starships? Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 02:41, June 8, 2013 (UTC)
    • I've added the unidentified one, but due to the fact that Proggas is never identified as part of the Hutt cartel, I don't think we can say his ship is part of it. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 23:47, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Progga needs to be contextified the first time he's mentioned in the intro. Something like "Crime lord and pirate Progga the Hutt owned a starship..." would be better. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:46, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • There. 501st dogma(talk) 11:44, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
Dionne Jinn
  • Could you find a quote or two?--Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 12:03, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
    • There you go. Only one to mention the ship. 501st dogma(talk) 13:16, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
      • How about the one where Rak says something about it "having been peeled open like a ration bar"? And I think Thrawn comments on the Hutt ship later on, too.--Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 14:09, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
        • I found the ration one and added it, but I couldn't find where Thrawn mentioned it. Do you know if the mention is later in the book? 501st dogma(talk) 19:58, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
          • I think it is a bit later, yes. It is something about evidence of slave-labor aboard the ship, but when I searched it myself, I couldn't find it anymore. But I'm sure I just read it not long ago... But that is not something to stop this from going through, so just forget that one.--Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 20:01, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • Intro - you call Progga a crime lord and pirate twice in successive sentences.
  • A Commanders and Crew section could probably be added. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:50, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
    • Bothe done. Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 12:24, June 27, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:08, July 8, 2013 (UTC)


  • Now the second sentence of the intro doesn't make any sense. Also maybe a mention of the crew dying during the battle into the Commander and crew -section?--Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 14:06, June 27, 2013 (UTC)