Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Prod

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Prod

This guy seems pretty trustworthy. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 23:56, February 19, 2013 (UTC)
Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:21, February 21, 2013 (UTC)
CC7567 ^(talk) 16:55, February 23, 2013 (UTC)
Menkooroo (talk) 04:45, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
Very nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:07, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

~~I think it would be helpful to have a Bts note here that both the species and gender have not been specified, seeing as both are missing in this case.~~ CC7567 ^(talk) 22:20, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Stake black ^msg 16:52, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

I think the bio could better establish that he's a guard. Currently it's only mentioned once, in passing, when the article is discussing him being a terroga trainer. The mention comes out of nowhere and is a little odd. Maybe first mention it when you bring up the resume? Also, the intro says that he's a private guard, but the bio doesn't mention the word "private."
- The source says "henchcreature/private guard for Hortentious Clee." They appear to be synonymous. What do you suggest? It's hard to pin down a profession on him, because he moved on to many different ones. See what I did there.
  - Great solution. I like it. Menkooroo (talk) 04:45, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
~~I'll present to you the same objection Bob had for the death dog's BTS, about creature art vs. concept art!~~ Menkooroo (talk) 17:10, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
- Done. Stake black ^msg 19:40, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

The SW.com external link for Leland Chee is currently dead and isn't really doing any good now. We have been able to salvage many of the SW.com forum discussions thanks to Tm T. See if you can't dig this one up. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:51, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- Hi Tope. The Wayback Machine backup link included in the ref works fine. Stake black ^msg 19:16, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
  - Ah, so it is. My mistake. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:00, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
~~The Biography never really states that Newenurf is his homeworld. This should be introduced somewhere around the section's first sentence.~~ Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:00, February 25, 2013 (UTC)
- A-done. Stake black ^msg 20:04, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:07, February 25, 2013 (UTC)