Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Power mace

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Power mace

  • Nominated by: ~SavageBOB sig 21:22, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Han Solo's answer to the dagger thorn.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 21:39, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote—Tommy 9281 Tuesday, August 2, 2011, 21:55 UTC
  3. ACvote Assuming we can get that Owners field thing worked out. Otherwise, fantastic job. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 22:36, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Talrrivanian JaingHead (Headquarters)
  5. Inqvote Menkooroo 00:16, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Power
  • Can you give a quick indication of the time when Solo weapon used the weapon in the intro? Something like "during the Galactic Civil War" or even just a "once" after "Han Solo." Whatever you think is best.
  • Can you tie the leading quote to the article's subject? The attribution doesn't establish a relation between the quote and the Power Mace, and the quote's relevance isn't apparent until one reads the History section. I'd like to see an explicit mention of the Power Mace worked into the quote's attribution.
  • And one more: Is there any way you can describe how it proved ineffective against the big guy? Menkooroo 17:05, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
    • Good points all. How's that? ~SavageBOB sig 18:57, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:31, August 9, 2011 (UTC)