- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Planet Killer
- Nominated by: Kilson(Let's have a chat) 16:51, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Oooh, the barn-burner's first superweapon. Hooray!
(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
- Nice.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 17:00, July 30, 2011 (UTC) - Gone into glitter-ball mode. —NAYAYEN 20:32, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 20:58, July 31, 2011 (UTC)- Well done Kilson!Talrrivanian
(Headquarters) - Nicely done. ~Savage
22:11, August 2, 2011 (UTC) - For men everywhere! Menkooroo 01:38, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
- Excellent.—Tommy 9281 Saturday, August 6, 2011, 21:00 UTC
Object
Nayayen
I'm not sure about the "theoretically" in the purpose field. It would like saying "Theoretically, I intend to use my new phone to make calls" because the purpose of me having the phone was to make calls; if it broke and never did make calls then that doesn't change the purpose. The range of the weapon was never proven though, so it does make sense to have "theoretically" in there.- Yeah, I had a feeling this would be brought up. I guess its purpose is the same whether it worked or not. I removed the "theoretically" from there.
- Just that from me; hopefully I made sense :P —NAYAYEN 17:21, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. :) Kilson(Let's have a chat) 17:31, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
Men!
In the "Description" section, can you give an idea of its size beyond "large" ? Large is pretty vague; the Death Star was large.- Added a rough estimate
A bit more description of its shape would be good, too, such as the four party hats sticking out of the side.- I tried to channel my inner Timothy Zahn to describe it. How's that? :P
"observed the planet in orbit" --- were they on a starship?Menkooroo 08:36, August 2, 2011 (UTC)- Yep, added. Thanks for the review Menk. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 08:55, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:08, August 6, 2011 (UTC)