Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Pendor Gyrr

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Pendor Gyrr

  • Nominated by: ~SavageBOB sig 04:17, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Did someone say Givin?

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Beware counterfeiters!--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:25, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Another great article by Bob, but then again, that's a Givin. :P Kilson(Let's have a chat) 15:39, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
    • <rimshot> XD ~SavageBOB sig 16:05, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Talrrivanian JaingHead (Headquarters)
  4. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 21:26, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote --Eyrezer 04:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Kilson
  • I'm a little confused as to why you put "Herself" in the "Affiliation" field. It's a bit odd to say that she's affiliated to herself, as that would technically apply to all characters on this wiki. What exactly was your reasoning here?
  • I believe you could fill in the "Skin" field of the Infobox with "White (exoskeleton)" and place the same info in the P&t.
  • Otherwise, looks good. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 18:33, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
    • Skippy added the "herself" thing in the affiliation, and I belive the reasoning is that she has no other loyalty than to herself. If that's just not done in character articles, I can yank it though; I'm a bit out of my element when not writing up species. :) ~SavageBOB sig 19:05, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
      • Yeah, you should probably change that. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 06:00, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
        • All right, try that. ~SavageBOB sig 15:38, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • Please fix the missing reference.
  • The Bio states that she was born on Yag'Dhul, yet the infobox doesn't list the planet in the "birth" field. If Yag'Dhul is only her homeworld, I don't believe we can assume it's her birthworld too unless it was directly stated. Please fix the inconsistency. CC7567 (talk) 19:59, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
    • Got the first one, but I'm not sure I get the second; is the "birth" field supposed to list the birthplace, and is this assumed to not necessarily be the same thing as "homeworld"? ~SavageBOB sig 21:17, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
      • Yes, the birth field is also for place of birth, in addition to date of birth, and yes, it should not be assumed that an individual's homeworld is also his/her birthworld unless explicitly stated so. CC7567 (talk) 21:19, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
        • OK, rechecked the OS, and both birth world and homeworld are given as Yag'Dhul. Should be fixed. ~SavageBOB sig 21:24, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:25, August 20, 2011 (UTC)