Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Pablo-Jill/Legends

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Pablo-Jill

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Support

  1. -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 20:34, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
  2. --Goodwood 22:00, 3 October 2007 (UTC)
  3. Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 15:57, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
  4. Greyman(Paratus) 18:20, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
  5. Domlith 21:53, 16 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From the Forest of Goodwood:
    • Introduction needs to be rewritten.
    • Every paragraph does not need to begin with "Pablo-Jill did..." "Pablo-Jill was..."
    • Every sentence does not need to contain the guy's name. Pronouns exist for a reason.
    • BtS could be fleshed out a bit more.

Other then that, keep up the good work.--Goodwood 20:48, 3 October 2007 (UTC)

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