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Owool Interceptor

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 16:57, July 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Dem Wookiee planes. Also, I'd like to point out the beautiful subsections present in this article, created for a certain Tope.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:58, July 23, 2015 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:50, July 23, 2015 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:22, July 24, 2015 (UTC)
  4. CC7567 (talk) 21:59, July 28, 2015 (UTC)
  5. Brandon Rhea(talk) 05:18, July 29, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Floyd
  • Is KashyCorp a shipyard or a ship manufacturer? Shipyards are usually just a place, nor the actual company.
    • Both sources (TCSWE and Inferno) call KashyCorp a shipyard.
  • "the interceptors were intended for use by the Galactic Alliance, but the New Jedi Order withdrawing from the Galactic Alliance saw the Owool Interceptors taken up by Wookiee pilots." How are these two events related?
    • That should do it.
  • You gotta link to the Battle of Kashyyyk, bruh.
    • It's linked in the body already, but I've corrected the error in the intro.
  • "Described as tough, fast, and ferocious like the Wookiees who built them by military observers," I think this would be more suited for the Characteristics section.
    • Moved.
  • You could use a little more context on the conflict between Caedus and the Jedi.
    • That should do it
  • "the Owool squadron, which numbered half of the capital ships in the Fifth Fleet," Are you trying to say that there were twice as many capital ships in the fleet as there were starfighters in the Owool squadron? There are less confusing ways to word that.
    • That better?
  • "the Owools rode the Anakin Solo's stripe," What does this mean?
    • Looking at the info again, it seems that they are flying up the SD's "spine" between the turbolasers. I've added that.
  • Could there be an article for the Hapan Battle Dragon?
    • pow.
  • "End of the war" is too vague. You mention an "operation" in the Roche system with no context, and then start the next paragraph with "After the events in the Roche system," without any information about what happened. IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:08, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
    • There, a bit of context added. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 22:22, July 20, 2015 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • In the leading quote, why is a four-period ellipsis used alongside a three-period one (…)? Is that the way the novel formats it? Otherwise it should be adjusted for consistency.
    • Nope, that seems to be an error, as the book as 3. Changed.
  • Would it be appropriate to link space warfare somewhere in relation to the Kashyyyk events? CC7567 (talk) 21:06, July 28, 2015 (UTC)
    • I think so. The art from Warfare shows them above the clouds a good distance, so it should be able to be considered as space warfare. linked.
  • Does the Bimm ensign in the leading quote deserve an article? Since the character has dialogue, it appears an article is warranted. CC7567 (talk) 21:07, July 28, 2015 (UTC)
    • Yep, done. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma(talk) 21:57, July 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:18, July 29, 2015 (UTC)