Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ostrine edge

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Ostrine edge

• Nominated by: Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:12, January 17, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: CA to GA, probably should have been a GAN before

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Nice work. Also, it's a part of WP:VG. :P —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 23:36, January 17, 2012 (UTC)
2. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:59, January 18, 2012 (UTC)
3. KOTOR 2, [Redacted by administration]. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:52, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:16, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
5. Your article-writing skill gives you the Ostrine EDGE on this site! Menkooroo 23:47, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
6. graestan^(talk) 19:42, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Dark Wars

• The intro and body refer to the Dark Wars as a single conflict, but our article on it claims that it's a series of conflicts. Is the article correct?
  • Yeah, it was a string of conflicts, fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:29, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
• In BTS: "After upgrading a melee weapon with the edge, the weapon gave the user" reads as if the weapon is doing the upgrading, not the user. Similarly: "the weapon gave the user a cold damage bonus and a reduction in damage taken from fire-based attacks. It also gave the weapon an increased chance of scoring a critical hit" --- The wording of these two sentences reads as if the weapon gives the weapon an increased chance of scoring a critical hit, which is confusing. Can you clarify which weapon you mean? Menkooroo 04:44, January 23, 2012 (UTC)
  • Hopefully it is clearer now.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:29, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

graestan

• I don't believe the mention of the Dark Wars is sourced correctly in the History section; no mention of that name appears in the games. graestan^(talk) 18:02, January 24, 2012 (UTC)
  • Good catch, how is the sourcing now?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:29, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:47, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

• Please note that I removed the links to fire, since that article does not correspond to the intended link. You're welcome to create an article for actual fire and replace all relevant links in this article. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:16, January 19, 2012 (UTC)