Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ortraag

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Ortraag

  • Nominated by: Eyrezer 13:08, October 28, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A Jedi Master from the Old Republic era

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Copy-edit. Go ahead and look at my changes and see if you disagree. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 13:20, October 28, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Copy-edit from me, too.--Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 18:26, October 28, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ~SavageBOB sig 02:42, October 29, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:40, October 29, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:26, November 1, 2011 (UTC)
  7. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 20:15, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  1. Only one: please state at least in the bio the gender of his apprentice. Otherwise very nice. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:13, October 28, 2011 (UTC)
    • Tick. --Eyrezer 22:39, October 28, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Please reload the infobox. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:43, October 29, 2011 (UTC)
    • Tick. --Eyrezer 23:53, October 29, 2011 (UTC)
  • Just one. This sort of makes it seem like he lived exclusively in the year 4,000 BBY, rather than circa 4,000 BBY. Can we tweak this wording at all? "The male Jedi Master Ortraag lived approximately in the year 4,000 BBY." Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:00, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:40, November 6, 2011 (UTC)