Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Orso Meeto

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Orso Meeto

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:06, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:An unpleasant slaver from Dark times

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:41, July 24, 2013 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 23:56, July 28, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Trip391 (talk) 05:57, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:28, August 2, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Winterz (talk) 12:22, August 3, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Apologies for the delay. 1358 (Talk) 19:17, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Ecks Dee
  • Work on your punctuation. There's quite a few commas missing, from an initial glance.
    • Think I've re-commafied it enough. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:48, June 22, 2013 (UTC)
  • Use the Quote template, not Dialogue, for conversations with 2 persons. 1358 (Talk) 19:46, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • Context for Esseles in intro.
  • Articles for the upper levels and Meeto's residence are needed
    • Residence article added. As for the upper levels having looked back at the comic I realise it only says that Resa was taken to an upper level to be sold, although it doesn't actually say that she was sold at Orto's appartment so I've removed it from the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:58, July 6, 2013 (UTC)
  • No mention of his attitude towards slavery in the PT? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:53, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
    • As in that he saw slavery as acceptable? Or his view towards the slaves he owned? Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:58, July 6, 2013 (UTC)
      • Both. Anything that can be gleamed from the comic is fair game. Also, was he aware of Qua's tastes? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:41, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
        • Ok I've added what I think can be stated based on the comic, but It doesn't make clear if he knows Qua eats the children or not. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:23, July 23, 2013 (UTC)
No summer vacations for you sir
  • You could probably try not to be so brief on some assessments like "the Jedi Dass Jenir", give the poor man his rightful title, sir! :)
    • Added his rank as knight :P Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:23, July 23, 2013 (UTC)
      • So now we're demoting him is it? :P Wasn't he a Jedi Master? Winterz (talk) 03:06, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
        • Huh I always assumed he was only a Knight, my bad. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:02, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
  • Reduce the body's image a tiny bit just for formatting sake. Winterz (talk) 19:48, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:17, August 3, 2013 (UTC)