Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ormeddon

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Ormeddon

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:07, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 19:37, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 407 words (115 introduction, 272 body, 20 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 23:26, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 16:32, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
3. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:46, 29 December 2023 (UTC)
4. See my copy-edit. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 19:36, 29 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• The date note could use a little work to indicate why it would be before 10 BBY, including mentioning the Tales from Vandor book Lewisr (talk) 19:23, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Reworked it a bit but didn't mention the book. I think it works now but let me know. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:17, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
    • I think it should note that Tales from Vandor establishes Beckett was involved Lewisr (talk) 06:51, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:21, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
• Midnight's book should be worked in Lewisr (talk) 19:23, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:17, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
• Missing a relevant gender category Lewisr (talk) 19:23, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:17, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
• I think the intro could include a bit about what happened after Ormeddon was dispatched to deal with the incident Lewisr (talk) 19:23, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:17, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
• Context for Foundry in the intro Lewisr (talk) 06:51, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:21, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
• Context for Beckett in the intro needed Lewisr (talk) 19:28, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:54, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
• For the second date note, I don't believe it's accurate to say Timelines dates Lando becoming Baron Administrator to 3 ABY. Would recommend looking at Formos for what it has for example Lewisr (talk) 19:28, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed up --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:54, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
• I think an equipment section can be added for the shuttle he owns Lewisr (talk) 19:28, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:54, 25 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:36, 29 December 2023 (UTC)