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Ord Mantell Travel Advertisement

  • Nominated by: Gal-icon OLIOSTER (talk) 22:42, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I'm really back this time!

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:56, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Winterz (talk) 21:38, April 10, 2014 (UTC)
  3. 501st dogma(talk) 21:08, April 11, 2014 (UTC)
  4. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 01:22, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Objections handled via IRC JangFett (Talk) 19:13, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:09, April 16, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • Text at the bottom of the poster, Galactic Basic Standard alphabet Aurebesh, read "Ord Mantell".: I feel like there is something missing.
    • Yes there was. Should be better now. Gal-icon OLIOSTER (talk) 23:00, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • We can't really source the purpose of the poster to TNEC, can we?
    • No we can't. Sourcing fixed. Gal-icon OLIOSTER (talk) 23:00, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
  • Good job. Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:56, April 8, 2014 (UTC)
501st
  • Minor: In the BTS, it would be nice if you specifically stated that Whorlport was on Ord Mantell.
  • Otherwise, good work. 501st dogma(talk) 21:03, April 11, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • According to my dictionary, "spired" is not an adjective. Meaning this sentence can't work like this: "where a large spired building was positioned." You could say "where a large building with a spire was positioned."
  • Just FYI that I've removed the article's dating for the Battle of Yavin, because it's redundant. It's literally saying "the Battle of Yavin took place 0 years Before the Battle of Yavin." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:02, April 13, 2014 (UTC)
    • That never even occurred to me. Good change. Gal-icon OLIOSTER (talk) 18:21, April 14, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:09, April 16, 2014 (UTC)