Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/OLR-4

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OLR-4

• Nominated by: NAYAYEN:TALK 14:49, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A somewhat introspective OOM droid from Cloak of Deception.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. JangFett ^(Talk) 23:00, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
2. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:10, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
3. A bit of a funny droid. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 18:45, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
4. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:33, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
5. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 15:16, May 12, 2010 (UTC)
6. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:46, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Just one: You say "The freighter was in the orbit of the Outer Rim planet Dorvalla, loading lommite ore that had been mined on the planet's surface." and then in the next sentence, you start the transition as: "Once carried into orbit". Seeing that you said the freighter was in orbit in the former sentence, the latter doesn't sound right. Please, clarify this. JangFett ^(Talk) 18:44, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
   • Hopefully clarified. Thanks for pointing it out. NAYAYEN:TALK 20:20, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
     • Nice. JangFett ^(Talk) 23:00, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
2. "When the sound of pressure relief valves was heard…" Was heard by whom? OLR-4? Otherwise, nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 00:59, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:40, May 15, 2010 (UTC)