- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.
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Nydak Alpha
- Nominated by: AmazinglyCool
(talk) 21:24, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 21:36, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 252 words (0 introduction, 164 body, 88 behind the scenes)
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Anil
The creature's "light" blue and "gray" skin, as well as its eye color, are infobox-exclusive.I think keeping the capitalizations of "Nydak Alpha" and "Lesser Nydak" in the article based on how the game renders the two names would be ideal."[…] only differences being the nydak alpha's blue skin and larger spikes." There are several other differences mentioned after this phrase, so it needs some rewording.Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:32, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 20:50, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool
Fan
- The intro makes reference to "Lesser Nydaks" without explicitly tying them to the nydaks mentioned prior; it would be too awkward to stop and identify Lesser Nydak as an alternative name for Nydak so I'd say just use one name or the other in the intro. Fan26 (Talk) 23:42, 1 October 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 21:36, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool
Macaroni
- It seems that the word count of the body is 162, so barring any changes (I'm not sure if Fan's objection will add anything), sectioning should be removed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:53, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 21:36, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool