Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nolor

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Nolor

• Nominated by: Jinzler 23:28, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Inquisitors like interrogating people

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 06:58, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
2. Again! —Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 22:19, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
3. Good work, Jinzler. Cylka^-talk- 10:37, 30 March 2009 (UTC)
4. Nice work :-). Grunny ^(Talk) 12:33, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:51, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu
   • You use join Sarlacc Project and part of Sarlacc Project, but in our actual article on it we use the Sarlacc Project. Which is correct?
     • I will get back to you on this --Jinzler 21:30, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
       • the Sarlacc Project is the correct form, so I have changed it to that --Jinzler 21:57, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Another favored trick of his was to use a mind trick on one target, while simultaneously using his telekinesis abilities to hurl small objects at another one. Is this referring to the fight where Nolor dies? If so, it's contradictory. He uses choke and hurls a large object, doesn't he? If this isn't about that incident, why isn't in the bio?
     • It's just listed as a possible tactic that he may use during the fight, whereas the choking-while-throwing-large-object thing is something it states that he actually does. As it is only a possible tactic he uses, I can't really mention it in the bio. I admit that this appears contradictory, but it's how the source is written --Jinzler 21:30, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
       • Then his ability to use Force Choke should be there. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 08:57, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
         • Added to P & A --Jinzler 21:57, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Nolor made his first and only appearance in The Core of Corruption, the sixth scenario in the Dawn of Defiance campaign, written by Sterling Hershey—a Wizards of the Coast Wizards of the Coast web supplements|online supplement to the Star Wars Roleplaying Game. The online supplement bit sounds like it's referring to Hershey. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 07:12, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
     • I have rephrased this --Jinzler 21:30, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
2. Nycety:
   • Shouldn't Nolor be in a Dark Jedi infobox as opposed to the current one?
     • Yeah, that is more appropriate, so I have changed it --Jinzler 22:30, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
   • "He began attacking them by hurling a large object at them with the Force, while at the same time using the Force to choke one of them." If you are referring to telekinesis of some sort, it needs to be linked upon its initial mention.
     • Done --Jinzler 22:30, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Not an objection, per se, but are there no quotes?
     • Unfortunately, no --Jinzler
   • Not bad. I really enjoy fellow darksiders.—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 00:53, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
     • They're more interesting than most lightsiders. --Jinzler 22:30, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
       • Indeed;)—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 22:19, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
3. Grunny:
   • Order 66 needs a little context in the intro, similar to how you have in the bio.
     • Added --Jinzler 23:00, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
   • A little more context on the Clone Wars, in regards to participants is needed.
     • Added --Jinzler 23:00, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Same in the bio.
     • Added --Jinzler 23:00, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Grunny ^(Talk) 11:08, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:51, 2 April 2009 (UTC)