Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Noghri revolution

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Noghri revolution

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Support

1. Talon Karrde ^(talk) 1:00, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

1. • Needs to be fully sourced per requirements.
     • Better, not finished.
   • Sources need to be formatted properly (no spaces).
     • Done.
   • 16 years later → "16" needs to be spelled out.
     • Done.
   • The article is full of choppy sentence fragments which need to be rewritten so the article flows better.
   • I have a feeling that this event is covered, or least mentioned, in some WEG sourcebooks. If the event is mentioned, then those sourcebooks need to be added to the articles Sources list.
   • Capitalization of Noghri throughout the article. noghri → Noghri.
     • Done.
   • Inter-article link need to be corrected → [[Separatist]] should be [[Confederacy of Independent Systems/Legends|Separatist]]
     • Done.
   • The article's writing, spelling, and grammar needs to be looked at with some attention—it needs a good copy-edit.
     • Greyman^(Paratus) 13:33, 17 August 2007 (UTC)
       • How is it now? Chack Jadson ^Talk 01:05, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
         • Looks better, I'll give it full read in the next little bit :) Greyman^(Paratus) 01:10, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
2. Per Greyman, and needs expansion. Don't worry, I'll help if you out. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers!)} 20:00, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
   • Addressed, I believe. Chack Jadson ^Talk 01:05, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
   • I added an intro. Should I expand the article by write more details? Please help me out in this, and please list some exact things which is wrong in the article. Talon Karrde^{Talk to the Chief Smuggler!} 13:27, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
     • No. You're fine. Intro's pretty good. Still needs sources, however. But I'll help you. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers!)} 13:56, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
3. Needs to be properly referenced, and labelled with all sources. (There are alien reference book dealing with Noghri which have information on the revolution). Also needs to be formatted properly, i.e. prelude, revolution, aftermath ex cetra, what effect did it have on the Noghri. Could also do with a main pic. -- dmirableAckbar ^{(It's A Trap!)} 13:45, 20 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

• How can I find all of the sources? Because almost all of the informations can be found in the books I listed.
  • I suspect there's additional information in The Thrawn Trilogy Sourcebook, as well as a whole bunch of the Essential Guides. Check the Noghri article itself for other possible appearances and sources. jSarek 11:34, 18 August 2007 (UTC)

• I tried to fix all the things I could. I think the sources part shows enough reference informations now. So if you have any other problems with the article please let me know.

• Also needs intro. Small article. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers!)} 20:02, 19 August 2007 (UTC)

• Not to worry, I have HttE and DFR. Wookieepedia gives me all the info we'll need to work on The Last Command. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers!)} 14:14, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
  • I sourced most of it. It's practically a single-source nom, it'll be easy to get all the references in for this one. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers!)} 14:40, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
  • Sure, but Greyman mentioned the WEG sourcebook too, so how can we get all possible sources? Talon Karrde^{Talk to the Chief Smuggler!} 18:25, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
    • ask Jaymach for help. Or else, you could look for it at a bookstore. Maybe Greyman has some, too. I don't know. Greyman and Jaymach both have their reference books listed on their userpage, if they have them, ask them for help. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers!)} 18:31, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
• I'm afraid I beg to differ with "it's practically a single-source nom." Various WEG sourcebooks, NEGAS, EGAS, AA, UAA and EGTP&M, as well as EC and NEC also have an abundance of info about the Noghri revolution. -- dmirableAckbar ^{(It's A Trap!)} 18:34, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
• Oh, that's a lot. Do all have to be shown in the sources? I haven't heard about most of it. Talon Karrde^{Talk to the Chief Smuggler!} 22:39, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
  • I'm afraid so. You don't have to reference them, but I won't ever strike my objection if there is info from those books that is not in the article. (The non-abbreviated names of them are New Essential Guide to Alien Species, Essential Guide to Alien Species, Alien Anthology, Ultimate Alien Anthology, Essential Guide to Planets and Moons, New Essentail Chronology and Essential Chronology.) -- dmirableAckbar ^{(It's A Trap!)} 22:43, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
    • I can help you with this some, if you want. Chack Jadson ^Talk 13:38, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
      • We'd enjoy your help, if you have some of the sources. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers!)} 13:41, 21 August 2007 (UTC)
      • Yeah, we need as much info as possible in the topic. Talon Karrde^{Talk to the Chief Smuggler!} 08:35, 22 August 2007 (UTC)
    • now it is competable Talon Karrde^{Talk to the Chief Smuggler!} 15:10, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
• REQUEST:could this nomination please be removed? The article is significantly below GA standard. -- dmirableAckbar ^{(It's A Trap!)} 19:10, 30 August 2007 (UTC)