Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Noell Ciro

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Noell Ciro

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Support

  1. Well, his brother's up for FA, so ... - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:19, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. I enjoy your style, Cavalier. Keep writing! Darth Xadún(Consult the Holocron) 08:09, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
  3. --Eyrezer 08:17, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
  4. Clean bill of health.—Tommy(There are no Jedi here) 11:21, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
  5. This one went through quick. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:27, 4 June 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. The Anvil:
    • No quotes?
      • Afraid not. The character does not appear in any in-universe narrative, and the lead quote is the only dialogue even referencing him.
    • Also, I know nothing about this character, but I imagine that some sort of BTS could be worked up.
      • Added.
    • Otherwise, very well written article.—Tommy(There are no Jedi here) 17:34, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa's Silver Hammer:
    • This is a pretty specific mention of "the" task force. Can we link an article to this at all? "the task force to liberate the planet Kal'Shebbol"
      • Article created and linked to.
        • Ok, thanks. Very ambitious and much appreciated. :)
    • A brief bit of context here would help clarify: "Ciro was assigned to the FarStar mission"
      • Added.
    • This is a bit awkward use of description here. Frozen as in icy climate, frozen monetary assets? Without previous knowledge of Dolomar being an icy planet, as I'm guessing this is about, a lack of context just makes this confusing. Please either contextualize, or remove the "frozen": "as a way to leave his frozen homeworld"
      • Removed.
    • I would assume we have an article for New Republic Special Ops. Please check and pipelink: "While Keleman trained as a commando operative"
      • Linked.
    • Same with the first objection: "the task force charged with liberating Kal'Shebbol"
      • Linked to newly created article.
    • POV: "changed Ciro for the better"
      • Removed "for the better".
    • Just checking, is this "Gamesmaster" and not "Gamemaster"? "the individual playing styles of the Gamesmaster"

Comments

  • Nice job, Cavalier. Just one pointer—I noticed you use double spaces in between sentences. While that is how most of us have been taught to type, we only single space between sentences around here. Just an FYI.—Tommy(There are no Jedi here) 11:21, 3 June 2008 (UTC)