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Nine-Egg Stew

  • Nominated by: SilverSunbird (talk) 23:22, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: To my regret, I have jumped on the food bandwagon.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:NOVELS

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Support

  1. ACvote Nothing wrong with the food bandwagon! JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:26, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
  2. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:33, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. —spookywillowwtalk 14:31, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 15:23, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  5. ACvote OOM 224 20:45, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • The sentence about its color and the peppers is nearly identical in the intro/body. Can we get some variation?
  • Isn't all of LOTJ in 232 BBY, not around? Or is that just the launch?
  • Can you split up the quote so that there's one for one of the body sections? Description or History should work. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:53, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Handled your first and last objections. As for the date, the dedication of the Starlight Beacon is the only event from Light of the Jedi given an exact date, in The Star Wars Book. {{Tl|LightOfTheJediDate}} used to say that more clearly but someone took it off. I'll probably add that detail back in since it makes things clearer. SilverSunbird (talk) 04:24, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Since the raid specifically happens after breakfast, how is it relevant to the stew? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:06, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
    • I reworded it and hopefully it ties together better now. SilverSunbird (talk) 18:14, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Spooky
  • I see that the sw.com article has a different capitalization for the stew, might that be BtS notable?
  • Was there any other mention of charhounds consuming the stew other than: "The hound was no fool—of all the Jedi of Elphrona, Bell Zettifar was by far the most likely to slip her a bite or two during meals." in Light of the Jedi? If my skim didn't pick it up then that'd be my bad, but I couldn't seem to find anything else in the stew's scenes, and this specifies the hound was fed but not what it was fed, or if it was stew.
  • The stew had a thick consistency, could be served with a ladle, and prepared in a kitchen - which can be added to the body, and the thick mention to the infobox as well as a physical descriptor.
  • Is Indeera actually shown consuming the stew? After reviewing the one quote about her and Bell going to meet for breakfast meal, it's not clear whether they'd just known Bell liked it and let him know about it being made for the meal. Unless there's another mention elsewhere, seems like an assumption to say it's consumable by their species when not shown.
  • The intro indicates that the stew was regularly served for meals such as breakfast. Similarly to above, while it can be said it was made for said meal once, what indication of it being a recurring part of breakfast would there be? If there is the context somewhere though, it would be intro exclusive at present.
  • Might be nitpicky, but does "favorite" pinpoint Bell's thoughts on the stew? From the mentions I see there's really only one scene where he is seen to actually consume it, but the article implies that it quickly became a favorite part of meal (implying recurring servings) when the relating quote seems to point at him being a fan of the chef's cooking overall. He's certainly shown to enjoy it, but the article also states he "usually" ate two bowls of it when served. I'm not sure that's the best to use either unless missing a mention, as he could've just been hungry that particular day, and not enough to establish it as a usual.
  • Greatstorm's scenes in The Rising Storm reflect that he had smelled the stew before, but not that he had ever consumed it (in relation to the article's mentions of his species finding it consumable).—spookywillowwtalk 03:03, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
    • It's implied that Bell has slipped Ember stew before; she reacts to him asking for more of it.
    • Added a note about the consistency. The ladle and kitchen stuff is far too generic to be worth mentioning.
    • Removed the stuff about it being edible to Tholothians, as you are correct that the scene does not mention if she had any.
    • Removed "regularly".
    • Being a favourite of Bell's is implied; the scene makes it clear he really likes it. Cleaned up the other stuff.
    • Loden is stated to have an empty bowl in Light of the Jedi, indicating that he ate the stew. SilverSunbird (talk) 03:13, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Added the capitalization detail; nearly forgot about it. SilverSunbird (talk) 03:19, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Was there any other mention of the hound regarding stew? If the mentioned quote is the only one, while it could considered as an assumption, the quote only implies that the hound was accustomed to recieving a form of food scraps/bites from Bell during meals. I don't think it's implied that Ember has specifically had this stew before/is able to consume it, given the surrounding context notes that a few of the Jedi took turns caring for the hound in varying ways, including feeding, since they had met.—spookywillowwtalk 05:24, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • There is a mention of the stew in Rising Storm at the start of chapter 22, not sure if you think it will require an update but letting you know Lewisr (talk) 21:35, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
    • Thanks! Article's been updated. SilverSunbird (talk) 21:41, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
      • No worries! Lewisr (talk) 21:46, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:45, 6 April 2022 (UTC)