Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nikko

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Nikko

  • Nominated by: OLIOSTER (talk) 15:06, March 23, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Contest winner character!

(5 ACs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 19:00, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:19, March 25, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 19:47, March 25, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote One more for the snowball! Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 20:09, March 25, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote JangFett (Talk) 21:28, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Attack of the Clone
  • "Upon inspection of the crime scene, the Exile was able to obtain the memory core of S-0D3-GE3, a service droid from the cantina that had been found near Sullio's body. With the help of a Twi'lek slicer named Kiph, the Exile was able to extract a recording of the murder from the droid's memory. The recording clearly showed that the kill shot came from the opposite direction of Ghent's office." I appreciate the detail that you use to explain the murder investigation, but it's slightly on the p-b-p side. Is it really necessary to mention Kiph, as he isn't directly relevant to Nikko? I think you can just shorten this passage to something like "The Exile was able to retrieve a recording of the murder from S-0D3-GE3, a service droid from the cantina that had been found near Sullio's body, and learned that the kill shot had come from the opposite direction of Ghent's office." It might be better to be a little more concise here.
    • I was wondering how much detail I should go into about the investigation. Addressed. OLIOSTER (talk) 14:38, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
  • Can you use {{WebCite}} to format the references? Let me know if you need help, since the template admittedly can be confusing.
    • Any help would be greatly appreciated on this, I don't even know how to start :). OLIOSTER (talk) 14:38, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
      • Alright, I think I've figured it out. I used the cite web template on the two Obsidian forums references. Do I need to use it for the IMDB reference as well? OLIOSTER (talk) 14:56, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
        • Nah, it should be fine; we already have an IMDB template that makes the citation look nice and all. :P CC7567 (talk) 18:47, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
  • Great work. CC7567 (talk) 10:31, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
  • Just one more: can you better identify Nikko's relationship with Ghent and Sullio in the bio? He seems to be familiar with them, but that isn't immediately clear. CC7567 (talk) 18:47, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
    • Noted that he was their friend. OLIOSTER (talk) 18:49, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:28, March 25, 2011 (UTC)