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Nidaljo

  • Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 07:10, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The typical, post-Sacking, embittered CSF cop.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:12, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:15, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 04:47, April 8, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 04:02, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:27, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • You give Coruscant as his homeworld in the infobox, but don't mention it in the body. Instead, you say that he served on Coruscant. Which one is correct? If both are correct, please mention it in the body.
    • Done.
  • You have to mention his eye and skin color (in the p&T), otherwise this would be infobox-exclusive.
    • Done.
  • You should mention to whom he spoke in the quotes.
    • Done.
  • You need to add a first appearence tag.
    • Done.
  • Can you elaborate it a little bit more clearer that he served the Republic?
    • I'm not sure how since he is a CSF officer (aka planetary police), not directly Republic officer.
  • Context for the Sacking of Coruscant.
    • Done.
  • More to come eventually. Good work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:34, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • No quote for the P&T?
    • Unfortunately I didn't get enough screenshots with his quotes so for now, no. But if I find one at a later time, I'll add it.
  • Please take a look at the three issues stated at the nom above. Otherwise, that's all. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:26, March 6, 2012 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • "...seven of his men with four others wounded." I believe that everything in the light side mechanics box up to this place can be placed in the normal part of the article.
    • Done.
  • Please expand the introduction to include some of the information from the events of the mission.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 00:08, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • As per my question/objection on Denal-Zon; can a dark side affiliated player undertake this quest? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
    • Per my answer with Denal-Zon: No, not really. As to the light side v dark side see consensus track forum. Coruscantfan (Talk) 15:16, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
      • Fair enough. Second query - you specifically link to the Hero of Tython as the Jedi Knight that undertook the assignment. I take it that this assignment is only available to that Jedi Knight class then? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 08:49, March 29, 2012 (UTC)
        • Yep. This is a part of the main storyline for the Jedi Knight only :) By the way, you may find this useful for future reference in regards to articles coming from TOR: http://www.swtor-spy.com/ Its a good resource if you don't have the game but still need to check out some facts/game play/storyline options/access images. All information in their databases is cited to a specific location in game so that it can be independently verified if there is questions about its accuracy (keeping in mind that some game play options vary from player to player). Also many if not most of the quests/missions have screenshots of the options and the in game conversation progression so you can pretty much depend on the accuracy of that. Long story short, while not an officially recognized website, it does give you a start if you're needing information on quests, missions, and story lines as well as codex entries with specific background information. Hope that helps! Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:15, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
          • Ah, but if I did that, then I would not be able to harass people about their noms. And where's the fun in that? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:15, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • If he served in the CSF for "years" as you say in the P&T, I think that would be worth mentioning in the Biography too. CC7567 (talk) 06:26, April 6, 2012 (UTC)
Jujiggum
  • "…with the Coruscant Security Force during the Cold War between the Galactic Republic and the Sith Empire. During that time, he attained the rank of sergeant…" Can we know for certain that he reached the rank of sergeant during the Cold War, and not before?
    • Done.
  • "Through the years, he achieved the rank of sergeant by the time of the Cold War between the Galactic Republic and the Sith Empire." The two different chronological specifications here ("through the years" and "by the time of the Cold War") don't really work together. There's probably a way to say that he spent years with the CSF without entangling the chronology.
    • Done.
  • The infobox says he had "dark blonde hair" and "dark blue" eyes, but the P&T just says they were plain "blonde" and "blue." (Also, remember that "blonde" is used only as a noun for females with blond hair, while "blond" is used as a noun for males or females with blond hair. And when you want to use the word as an adjective instead of a noun, it has to be "blond," not "blonde.")
    • I think you missed your calling as an English teacher. ;)
      • Hah, I mostly know this stuff because I grew up in a house with two English majors :P Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 04:02, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • It's good that you give the dark side option in the BTS, but please state more clearly that this article assumes the light side, as well as why it does so.
    • There is a game mechanics tag that explicitly states the light side is assumed in the game.
      • It's pretty common to make a quick note in the BTS anyway; up to you. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 04:02, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • That's all from me. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:13, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

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