Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Never Die

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Contents

  • 1 Never Die
    • 1.1 (4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 501st
        • 1.1.2.2 Exiled Jedi
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Never Die

  • Nominated by: grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 04:28, June 7, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Little did we know "Never" was actually his first name.... 501st dogma(talk) 00:43, June 20, 2015 (UTC)
  2. ACvote My only real nitpick is that I don't believe there any Legends instances of non-Humans who are considered native Alderaanians (excluding the Killiks, who are never referred to as simply "Alderaanians"). Meaning that, much like the term "Corellian," simply identifying someone as an "Alderaanian" is synonymous with saying they're Human; Alderaanian is a Human subculture. I'm not going to make an objection for it, but I think you're justified in asserting Never Die is Human, which you should consider adding in. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:51, June 30, 2015 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Nevar...--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 16:31, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:39, July 17, 2015 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 02:48, July 17, 2015 (UTC)

Object

501st
  • Bio should probably say the Empire destroyed Alderaan.
    • Added. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:14, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Context on Tatooine in the bio.
    • Done. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:14, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • You might want to be more be more consistent when referring to the Rebellion, as currently you are talking about them as the Rebellion, the Alliance to Restore the Republic, and the Rebel Alliance.
    • Switched the "Rebellion" usages to Alliance, but left the rest. How's that? In general, I prefer the variety in order to make it less repetitive. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:14, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Is the adventure a Rebel adventure? If so, shouldn't we assume in between roleplaying headers that the good guys get the Shard? 501st dogma(talk) 12:34, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
    • No, it is not from any specific perspective, with the idea being the players are in complete control of the outcome. It's setup in a way that the players each take a character and don't know whose side the other characters are on, and the game master is Heater, who is the relatively neutral third-party. Thanks for the review! :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:14, June 19, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Please use the term Alderaanian in the body as it is currently exclusive to the introduction.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 16:09, July 5, 2015 (UTC)
    • How's that? Thanks for the review. :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:24, July 5, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

  • Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:48, July 17, 2015 (UTC)