Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Neebo/Legends

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Neebo

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  • Check your biography sourcing. The two first sentences can't be sourced to the TCW novel. Also, while you're on it, please capitalize the Force. -- 1358 (Talk) 14:35, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • "Sometime before 22 BBY": where is that confirmed? The episode guide gives no mention of the date—her mission is only confirmed to have happened prior to the mission to Vassek's third moon, which leaves open the possibility that it even took place earlier that year. Please reword accordingly.
    • Fixed.
      • This has been fixed in the body, but not in the intro. Please fix it in both places. Also, it might be more prudent to simply say "Sometime before Kit Fisto's mission to Grievous's castle [or whatever you want to call it] of around 22 BBY" to achieve more specificity with the still-unknown date. CC7567 (talk) 20:55, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
        • Fixed.
          • I meant for you to add it as the date for her mission—i.e. replacing what is now "In the waning years of the Republic" with that; I'm not sure if I made that clear. I leave the final decision up to you, but I think that being specific from the very start is the best thing to do. CC7567 (talk) 08:38, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
  • "Fisto examined the weapon before engaging the cyborg General in combat." I really don't see how this is relevant to Neebo at all—this is an article about her, not the weapon.
    • Removed.
  • "The guide only states that Neebo went missing, but the fact that her lightsaber was found in Grievous's castle suggests that the cyborg previously killed her, although this is not canonically confirmed." True it might be, but the inclusion of speculation in a Bts section is rather hazy. The Bio already does a perfectly appropriate job of leaving this connection open by mentioning the fact that Grievous took the lightsabers of those Jedi whom he had killed. Please clarify.
    • Clarified.
  • Although the word count is current 255, I suspect that it's going to go back down after these objections are addressed. If that's the case, I'd highly recommend that you take this to the CAN instead of the GAN, as articles that simply cannot make the word requirement should not be stretched unnecessarily to pass it. CC7567 (talk) 20:45, August 23, 2010 (UTC)
    • I agree. Feel free to removed it from the GAN page. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:01, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
      • I'm going to wait until I finish my review to take the word count again and then evaluate with you what to do, but it's currently under 250 words. CC7567 (talk) 20:55, August 24, 2010 (UTC)
        • Ok with me. Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:25, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
          • It's currently at 240, and I would personally recommend that you take it to the CAN and then bring it back here only if it proves that it can be over 250. Otherwise, it won't properly meet the word requirement. You can either request for this GAN to be removed or I can start a vote for removal; if I don't hear from you soon, I'll start the vote. CC7567 (talk) 19:03, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
            • Please remove it. I'll bring it on the CAN page as soon as the article is removed. Clone Commander Lee Talk 07:25, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

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