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Natacha Bustos
- Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 19:23, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Too long for CA-length
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS, WP:CREA, WP:THR
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
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- Samonic
18:34, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
- NanoLuukeCloning facility 21:25, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
- Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:35, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:24, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 08:46, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
Did some more extensive than usuall rewording for a copy-edit. Please check to make sure you're ok with the changes. MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 06:49, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
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NanoLuuke
Please remove all non-used parameters on Ref 2. NanoLuukeCloning facility 13:29, 14 August 2022 (UTC)The table need to be clean-up of |- bgcolor="#CCCCCC" align="center" and columns title should not be manually bolded (prettytable does that already). NanoLuukeCloning facility 13:29, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
Where possible, I think we should link to the individual's professional facebook page rather than their personal page Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:58, 2 October 2022 (UTC)Missing her blogspot and flickr Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:58, 2 October 2022 (UTC)From this article, I think we can use this line "I’ve always loved comics, and it’s been my personal challenge to dedicate myself to this. Since I was really young, if you know that you like it, you have to fight for it. It’s something that really comes from the inside. It’s a very visceral feeling." as an opening quote. There's other generic quote potential in the podcast itself, nothing star wars-centric unfortunately (I found the podcast episode on spotify and have linked this to you on Discord) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:58, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
I understand why you would merge the final column cells, but it creates a weird thing where the referencing implies that her having done the VC on THR 4 can be souced to a Previews thing for Aphra. You may want to split them so that the sourcing is more clear.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:29, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
Ecks
In the second intro sentence, you have two clauses that start with "for the". Can we get some rewording here to avoid repetition?1358 (Talk) 12:58, 26 October 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:49, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
- Just so you're aware, Natacha is doing a variant cover for Doctor Aphra (2020) 25 as per the solicits for October's comics Lewisr (talk) 14:24, 19 July 2022 (UTC)
- Now feels like an appropriate time to ask this question: since it's an official source, shouldn't we put Marvel pages in "Sources"? NanoLuukeCloning facility 13:29, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
- We've never done that before and I think it would require a larger discussion. They're more database listings like Amazon or Edelweiss than articles that were written, so I'm hesitant to put them in the Sources section, but I could see the argument for that. Dentface (talk) 20:35, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
- Well, in the case of this article, you're right, there is no need, and I should have suggested that in this context, but for news article from Marvel, we definitely have to put them in sources. NanoLuukeCloning facility 21:25, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
- Agreed, articles should go in sources but product pages should not. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:29, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
- Well, in the case of this article, you're right, there is no need, and I should have suggested that in this context, but for news article from Marvel, we definitely have to put them in sources. NanoLuukeCloning facility 21:25, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
- We've never done that before and I think it would require a larger discussion. They're more database listings like Amazon or Edelweiss than articles that were written, so I'm hesitant to put them in the Sources section, but I could see the argument for that. Dentface (talk) 20:35, 14 August 2022 (UTC)